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onsdag 30 november 2011

The bride

Mark, 28, and Amanda, 21, had been at a party and they where on their way home. They decided to take a shortcut through the graveyard. 
”Are you shure about this Mark?”, said Amanda. ”Maybe it’s ghost’s here!”
”Yes, I’m sure that we can take this way, and you know that there is no such thing as ghosts” said Mark and looked at Amanda.
”I guess you’re right.”, Amanda answer.
 Then they heard something from the church, they heard that someone was crying. Amanda and Mark wanted to know who was crying, so they changed direction to the church. 
In the church it was a woman by the altar. She had a weddingdress, but it was’nt very clean. Then suddenly, she turn around. They couldn't see her eyes, her eyes where hidden under her long black hair. She looks up, her eyes, they were gone! Now they ask themselfs, ”Why didn't she have eyes?”
”Mark, I’m scared....”, Amanda said.
After an hour, they realize that a all they had been doing was staring at each other.
”Why are you crying?”, Mark said and looked at her.
”My groom, Mike, didn't show up on my wedding....” the bride answer.
”But what about your eyes then?”, Amanda asked.
”I.... I... cried them out.”, she said and showed Amanda her eyes in her hands.
”OM MY GOD!!!”, Amanda screamed, she was really scared by now. Then the bride asked what their name’s was. They sad what their names where.
”WHAIT, you said MARK!!?”, the bride said.
”Eeeh, yes?”
”HOW COULD YOU!!!” the bride ran to Mark and grabbed him, she yelled at him. She yelled: ”Why did’nt you showd up!!?” and ”How could you!”. Of course he didn't understand anything. Then, suddely, she cuts of his throat. He was laying on the floor, bleeding. She had VERY sharp nails. Amanda screamed and ran out of there.
She ran and ran, she didn't turn back, EVER!! Later when she came home, Amanda told the police. The police went there, but the bride was not there. Only mark’s dead body, all covered in blood. Nobody knew who that bride was. 

But, after a year Amanda found’s out that the bride was from the late 1800 century. It was ment that she whould get married but her groom didn't show up, so every year she wait in the church to get revenge, and that one time she was whating, Amanda and Mark was only there at the wrong place, at the wrong time. The bride thought Mike was the her groom that left her and he also had the name Mark.

3 kommentarer:

  1. What an interresting theme to a spooky story. The old woman who all tis time still watied for the love of her life. Your story is easy to read and you explain many things in your text, for example why the bride acted the way she did.

    SvaraRadera
  2. Mål: Stava bra och ha rätt tempus.
    Nöjd: Jag är nöjd med de beskrivningar och förklaringar som är med. Jag tycker även att jag fick in den här skrämmande känslan.
    Vidare: Stavfelen, tempus och sätt in ord på rätt plats så att de inte hamnar fel.

    SvaraRadera
  3. Du har glömt att lägga till etiketten "portfolio".

    SvaraRadera